Friday, November 25, 2011

2 p.m

Ammar looks at his watch. It is already 1.50 p.m. and Aida is not even here. Normally Ammar is the one who is always late. Aida promises that she will wait for Ammar at 2.00 p.m.

"Where are you Aida?" says Ammar. He starts dialing Aida's number but it is unreachable. He tries over and over again. But still no answer.

"Well, I just wait for her. It is just 1.55 p.m"

While waiting for his sweetheart, his mind starts wondering. 

Aida. 25 years old. A simple girl. Always wears Bawal scarfs, long sleeve T-shirts and jeans. She is very good in time management. She loves punctuality and hates procrastination. Aida has a very beautiful smile. And a small dimple on her cheek. Aida always meets Ammar at 2.00 p.m everyday since her break starts at that time. She has to wait for almost 15 minutes for Ammar to arrive. Ammar will apologize every day when Aida starts complaining.

"Hey, Ammar! What are you doing here? Buying some stuffs?" A male voice suddenly struck Ammar's ears.

"Oh, Khairi! Nah, I am just waiting for Aida. She is late you know. It is already 3.30 p.m" Ammar looks at his watch again.

Khairi remains silent before looks at Ammar. "Ammar, Aida is no longer with us. She passed away last month. Don't you remember?"

"What are you saying, Khairi? Aida is not dead. She will come. I know," Ammar's voice starts to change.

"Ammar, let's go home. You come here everyday for Aida. She will not wait for you as always. I am sure she does not want to see you like this Ammar. I know you love her and we both know she loves you more. Let's go home ya"

"Khairi, I miss Aida. I miss her so much. Ya Allah..." Ammar's tears start to run on his cheek. Everybody is looking at him and he does not give a damn. He just wants Aida.

"Remember Allah, Ammar. He knows what is best for you. Everything happens for a reason. Allah loves Aida more. Come, let's go."



November 25, 2011 at 9:24 PM

ini sgt sedih dill n ini adalah LDR yg pling lama..:(

November 25, 2011 at 9:56 PM


u are so good in writingggg huhuhuhu

November 25, 2011 at 11:09 PM

eh , ouhh . kesian , ini menyayat hati . :(

orlando ahmad
November 25, 2011 at 11:17 PM

Amar pon akan 'mati'

November 26, 2011 at 12:43 AM

ringkas tp amat terkesan di hati

November 26, 2011 at 1:42 AM

Ammar..lepaskan Aida pergi..& kamu..teruskan hidup~ jika tidak..kamu juga akan turut 'mati'~

November 26, 2011 at 6:33 AM

Wow...hebatnya karya kamu!!

November 26, 2011 at 7:32 AM

taknak cerita camnie.sedih siot.haaaa

November 26, 2011 at 9:29 AM

to let go is the hardest part...

November 26, 2011 at 4:41 PM

hargai la setiap detik saat bersama dgn org tersyg. :)gud writing dill.

November 26, 2011 at 5:44 PM


November 26, 2011 at 6:42 PM

kenapa mesti cerita sedeh? :(

November 27, 2011 at 1:10 AM

susah kan nak lupakan org yg kita syg :(

November 27, 2011 at 10:12 AM

susah nak terima hakikat.pedih dan kena terus kan

November 27, 2011 at 12:25 PM

Dia Maha Penyayang..

November 27, 2011 at 3:11 PM

tabah Ammar!!

November 27, 2011 at 8:17 PM

mcm kelas bahasa inggeris

November 27, 2011 at 10:41 PM

dill...!!!makin kreatif yer kamoo..^_^

November 27, 2011 at 11:10 PM

baa~ CAK!!

ok sedih.. teringat arwah..

November 27, 2011 at 11:54 PM

sebak :')

November 28, 2011 at 11:51 AM

adakah orangyg akan buat cm tuh bile aku dh x derk nnt. adoiii

November 28, 2011 at 4:24 PM


ammar tu tlupa ke aida da tak adA?


November 29, 2011 at 10:00 AM



December 2, 2011 at 4:54 PM

tulisan yang berperasaan..

sedih dill..

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